Friday, November 18, 2011

attack of the dark angel's

once there was angel and Moises walking down the street minding our own business and 40,0000 angel's flying down the hill to kill us. Then they said you are dead so i pulled out my chain and they got tangeld up and i pulled out my ak47 and stated to shot 400 and then Moises ran to his house then he told his mom i was scared  so they killed me because Moises left me alone with them . The next day moises came back and he saw me still alive so he took me to the hospital. Then moises went to find them so he found them and he pulled out his bosuka and so he was hollding the bosuka the  wong  so he blew his head of and they said i was dying so that was the end of angel and moises. AWESOME. They got 40,000,000,

1 comment:

  1. This story was cool but need to capitalize certain nouns and titles. Also, check for run-on sentences.

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